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Post  herman285 on Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:33 pm

Hello

Thanks for the translation! It really great!!

I got a little suggestion.

I feel that in the translation, Weed seem a bit too "nice".

From the summary and the discussion, Weed should be a bit more evil or rather selfish. I meant it in a good way. He would not harm other intentionally but when there is a share of loot or reward, he will try to get the bigger pie. <-- this is the comedy part of the Novel which I really love.

I also like parts where the novel describe other people's reaction when they are shocked to see Weed's power or extraordinary things that Weed does. <-- stuff like "jaw dropping"

I also like to read what he thinks in his mind, the monologue is very funny, especially when it come to money.

I think it is ok to get creative with the translation.

Well, this is my thought anyway. Ignore what I say if I don't make sense lol

AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE TRANSLATION!!!!! Very Happy

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